2 thoughts on “Untitled Poem”

  1. This is really strong; in 4 short lines, you paint such wonderful and heartbreaking imagery. If this has any footing in reality, I hope things improve for you. I’m a long time fan of your blog and appreciate each entry. This one struck a cord in me, however, at least enough to comment.

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    1. I appreciate those kind words. This is rooted in real events, yes. I’m not one for writing poetry usually — maybe a couple of lines here or there. I’m a reader/appreciater. 🙂 Anyway, this kind of just fell out onto the page in the moment. I hope things improve, too. Very nice of you to say. Thank you for reading!

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